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I Want to stay in our own Land
This place is mine and ours but,
It makes me sad
To see the Jewish people
Not free,
Unlike the birds in the sky.
Why can't we be free
Like the other people are?
Who can walk and talk
Whenever they want,
And not worry about
What other people say or if
We are going to get killed someday?
I want to stay in my Land
People don't understand that
All we need is our own land
So we can believe in our religion,
And no one else should make that decision.
I want to stay in our own land.
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| alma -
2006-01-14 |
I think the Land is too much repetead in the end of your poem, even if the title is Our Land.
Suggestion: you may try not to use that word but a synonym or an expression which let the reader imagine and be in that image, as a whole.
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| aiosub -
2006-01-14 |
Thanks. I shall try to find a synonym.
Adriana
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